please review my free site and gallery

[mniki]

Hi

For 2 months now I have been learning to make galleries and free sites, now I have tried to make free site and 2 galleries using the same pics and design.
Please review It and tell me If there Is anything wrong or should I change anything.

free site:
http://www.naturalpussy.net/tgp/kaliyah/index.html

galleries:
http://www.naturalpussy.net/tgp/kaliyah/hairy_pussy_gal1.htm

http://www.naturalpussy.net/tgp/kaliyah/hairy_pussy_gal2.htm

Thx in advance for help and usefull suggestions.

[swedguy]

Hi Mniki,

I think they're nice looking and should probably get listed at many places.

You should add a title on the index page though, like "Hairy Kaliyah" or what the site is called.
You also have a typo on the gallery pages "VIST" should be "VISIT".
One thing that looked kinda odd was the 1st picture in gallery 2. Not sure if gallery 2 continued from gallery 1 and the 1st picture was just a random pic or gallery 2 was a whole new set.

Good luck :)

[tradr_09]

Yeah I noticed that spelling mistake too. But apart from that it all looks ok, fast loading page, right number of pics, so there won't be any problems submitting.

Best of luck

[mniki]

Will fix mistakes , and about that odd pic, gallery one and two are 2 different pic sets,

[Certifiedbitch]

i think they all look good from your freesite to galleries.
just fix some of the spelling error and you're set.

[ronnie]

I think they look pretty good, like the colors and layout. Only thing, with the free site, is the pictue on the index/warning page, kinda graphic, might be a problem some places.

ronnie

[mniki]

Only thing, with the free site, is the pictue on the index/warning page, kinda graphic, might be a problem some places.

ronnie

Can you explain a bit, I am not sure I understand

[Count Zero]

Mniki, I'm think, ronnie means that some reviewers may consider this picture as a hardcore on a warning page and not list site.

Nice site, I would list it

[ronnie]

Mniki, I'm think, ronnie means that some reviewers may consider this picture as a hardcore on a warning page and not list site.

Nice site, I would list it

Ya, thats what I was trying to say..:)

ronnie

[mniki]

Ok, thx

[Presmar]

I agree....looks pretty good to me...as Ronnie mention some would reject you for having that large pic on the warning page. It was the first thing that came to mind when I viewed them. Looks good there, but just to play it safe you could replace the warning page pic with a large banner instead.

[mniki]

will try to make a version with large banner instead pic