what I have sofar minus a warning page

[tiny]

Well this is what I have so far as you can tell its kinda plain not great on verbage,but I think that comes in time.Or is it too plain

http://www.tinysplace.com/free/chubby/brandi/main.html

[DangerDave]

Tiny, The basics are there :)

Some of the text is a bit hard to read... - try playing with the BG colour and the TEXT colour

Some of the text needs centering too.

The bottom banner on - http://www.tinysplace.com/free/chubby/brandi/gal1.html - looks like it is built for a WHITE background. ? and therefore looks a bit tacky..

Same on the second gallery..

Yep - you need more text..

It's a decent start.. and I have seen worse submitted;(

DD

[Surfn]

Ditto what DD said.

If it were me I would make the linked text purple so that it jumps out at surfer. Non-linked text I would make black. You do need to use more non-linked text to tease the surfer into clicking the links. IMHO

[ewriter]

hey tiny,
what type style are you using? been trying to find that style to use on some of my sites.

[Pusher]

Tiny,

Your site is clean and simple - too simple... Make sure you use text under or above banners - it really helps with conversions!

Also, you might try advertising more than one affiliate site per page - more bang for the buck!

[bowman]

I'd like to see better quality compression on the images. I can't tell if you've run a filter on the images or they are just compressed at a low quality rate.

This girl looks like she has great skin, but the quality is lost through the compression artifacting around her eyes and mouth.... just my $0.02 worth.

[backoffbitch]

The skin definately looks filtered, almost like "auto levels" was ran in photoshop a few too many times